Morning Snow | Snow haiku poem example | 030409

Morning snow
on wooded branches –
Deadlines loom.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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8 thoughts on “Morning Snow | Snow haiku poem example | 030409

  1. Dear Ken,
    For me this one doesn’t quite work, because the connection between the two parts doesn’t click. Any other observation of natural beauty could go with “deadlines loom” (and often does, in my experience!) and the poem would be pretty much the same.
    What paticular moment of nature, or way of expressing that moment, makes the looming deadlines particularly vivid, or painful, or meaningless, or, now that we come down to it, not so important after all? 🙂

  2. ken, dont listen to the kris, your poem was amazingly written! It worked very well for me! I would love to read more poems that you have written. (:

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