Dead Birds | Economics senryu poem example | 021109

Dead birds –
This Peruvian sweater
was cheap

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

6 thoughts on “Dead Birds | Economics senryu poem example | 021109”

Bluegrass Poet on February 12, 2009 at 10:46 am said:

Haiku for social commentary! I like it.

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Alison on February 12, 2009 at 5:09 pm said:

I like this one! The imagery surprises….

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gautami tripathy on February 12, 2009 at 8:24 pm said:

Well put!

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Ken Wagner on February 12, 2009 at 8:37 pm said:

Bluegrass Poet – I hadn’t tried this before. The topics are endless!

Alison / Gautami – Thanks. I can never quite tell how others will respond. The mystery of poetry, I suppose.

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comrade harps on February 12, 2009 at 11:25 pm said:

It took a moment, then Wham!

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haikuexpeditions on February 13, 2009 at 8:16 pm said:

again this touches me…deeply. thanks!

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