Geese Rest | Birds haiku poem example | 020809

Geese rest
in the green field until
tomorrow.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

5 thoughts on “Geese Rest | Birds haiku poem example | 020809”

Brett on February 8, 2009 at 10:16 pm said:

They Flew
away into the wind
yesterday

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Bluegrass Poet on February 9, 2009 at 11:44 am said:

Here too the geese rest in the fields. Spring may come.

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Ken Wagner on February 9, 2009 at 8:35 pm said:

Quite the portrait of geese we are building. I love it!

Geese descend
to this spot
again, again.

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Bill on February 9, 2009 at 9:58 pm said:

crowded park
the geese who came
to stay

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Ken Wagner on February 10, 2009 at 9:08 pm said:

Check out today’s post, which was inspired by this comment stream. Thanks to all!

I know, Bill, I need to work on my haiku two-part structure, but this is fun, too. I’ll get there, I promise.

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