Footprints | Snow haiku poem example | 011109

Fresh snow –
Footprints where they
don’t belong

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits


5 thoughts on “Footprints | Snow haiku poem example | 011109

  1. There I go, trapped in my brain again! I wanted this to be spooky, with a sense of suspense – even danger. This is more closely what I meant to convey –

    Fresh snow –
    A stranger’s footprints in
    my back yard

    Thanks for the feedback. What do you think of this version, or perhaps it is a separate poem?

    Gautami – Thanks for the link!

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