His Coat | Animals haiku poem example | 010309

His coat
is still winter thick – A bear
sniffing berries.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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7 thoughts on “His Coat | Animals haiku poem example | 010309

  1. Yes, hibernating vs. berries!

    I meant for this one to suggest the emergence of spring from winter. Perhaps adding “still” in the second line will make this clearer.

    Was –
    His coat
    is winter thick – A bear
    sniffing berries.

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