Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908

I can’t see
On frozen streets
the sun glares

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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3 thoughts on “Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908

  1. How do you know the sun glares if you can’t see?

    But seriously, isn’t it seeing (nothing but the glaring sun) that’s the problem, instead of not seeing?

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