Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408 Posted on December 24, 2008 by Ken Wagner Cut trees in a vacant lot drying out. Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailLike this:Like Loading... Related
Beads of pain Stump now discolored …Last season’s trim Enjoy, S http://thehaikumoment.wordpress.com http://haikuexpeditions.com Reply ↓
Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures. Reply ↓
Like it. But does “vacant lots” need to be plural?
Yes, I think you are correct.
Was –
Cut trees
in vacant lots
drying out.
Beads of pain
Stump now discolored
…Last season’s trim
Enjoy,
S
http://thehaikumoment.wordpress.com
http://haikuexpeditions.com
Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures.