Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408

Cut trees
in a vacant lot
drying out.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

4 thoughts on “Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408”

Adriaan on January 1, 2009 at 12:32 pm said:

Like it. But does “vacant lots” need to be plural?

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Ken Wagner on January 1, 2009 at 10:23 pm said:

Yes, I think you are correct.

Was –
Cut trees
in vacant lots
drying out.

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haikuexpeditions on February 1, 2009 at 10:14 pm said:

Beads of pain
Stump now discolored
…Last season’s trim

Enjoy,
S
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Ken Wagner on February 2, 2009 at 8:26 pm said:

Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures.

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