Curved Hills | Mountains haiku poem example | 122208

Curved hills
covered in clouds –
The small of her back.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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8 thoughts on “Curved Hills | Mountains haiku poem example | 122208

  1. “Your back” would better suggest the intimacy of an encounter, but this was more a moment of recollection. I was on the road, driving into the mountains.

    Plus, I’m not sure she would have appreciated my breaking an intimate moment to compare her to the hills, no matter how lovely!

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