Scattered Leaves | Animals haiku poem example | 112608

A squirrel left
this acorn among
scattered leaves.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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3 thoughts on “Scattered Leaves | Animals haiku poem example | 112608

  1. I know I’m nagging way too much, but wouldn’t it be better to present this as two separate images? Like this:

    This acorn,
    left by a squirrel among
    scattered leaves.

    You could also decide to set the squirrel apart, but whichever you choose, with the focus on one and the other as background, the image becomes sharper, I think.

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