I Breathe | Breath senryu poem example | 112008

leaving

Today
I breathe; tomorrow
I bellow.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

4 thoughts on “I Breathe | Breath senryu poem example | 112008”

aj3d on November 20, 2008 at 3:07 am said:

Wow! Like it!

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Ken Wagner on November 20, 2008 at 5:25 am said:

It was almost an afterthought, which I guess is what you have been telling me. Capturing the birth of moment, just before it wisps away.

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aj3d on November 20, 2008 at 1:01 pm said:

Of course you can’t know for sure today what you will do tomorrow, but apart from that it’s very nice.

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Borut on January 4, 2009 at 4:53 pm said:

In between, as Issa might comment:

Tub to tub
The whole journey
Just hub-bub!

– trans. Lewis Mackenzie

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