http://haikuhabits.com/2010/01/29/empty-house-birds-haiku-poem-example-012910/ How to Write Haiku Poems for Personal Growth | A Forum for Examples and Commentary Tue, 13 Jul 2010 23:22:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ http://haikuhabits.com/2010/01/29/empty-house-birds-haiku-poem-example-012910/#comment-729 Shannon Wagner Tue, 02 Feb 2010 14:03:04 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1689#comment-729 I like a few things in this poem. The play on "crow calls" vs. "crow caws". The way that the common phrase "out in the cold" is shifted so that "out" gets linked to "calls out". The "empty house" makes me think of "inside" - later, I am "inside" in the cold. Very cool.. I like a few things in this poem. The play on “crow calls” vs. “crow caws”. The way that the common phrase “out in the cold” is shifted so that “out” gets linked to “calls out”. The “empty house” makes me think of “inside” – later, I am “inside” in the cold. Very cool..

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