Haiku Habits

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  Kurt // August 2, 2009 at 3:27 pm | Reply

  I like the concision of this, and the two images work well together, perhaps unexpectedly.

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  Ken Wagner // August 4, 2009 at 7:08 pm | Reply

  Thanks for the feedback, Kurt. I was trying to play with various sensations: ice, the hard “k”sound in vodka and cut, and the slowed-down ending produced by “flowers.” Glad to find it unexpected!

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  rhonna // August 7, 2009 at 12:16 am | Reply

  give me and example of star poem

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    Ken Wagner // August 7, 2009 at 4:58 pm | Reply

    Here you go – Street Stars. We aim to please!