Night falls onto black ice.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
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Filed under Haiku Poems About Night
Dangerous.
brilliant
black night gets me black knight
I wanted this one to descend – so to speak – naturally. I was concerned that the double meaning of “falls” might seem too forced.
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Dangerous.
brilliant
black night
gets me
black knight
I wanted this one to descend – so to speak – naturally. I was concerned that the double meaning of “falls” might seem too forced.