Manicured | People senryu poem example | 022009

2 Responses to Manicured | People senryu poem example | 022009

1. comradeharps

   February 21, 2009 at 9:59 pm

   I read “tips” as lips, and took it as being about anticipation. OK, it’s about momentary denial then. Very true.

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2. Kris

   February 22, 2009 at 7:53 pm

   I like this one! Witty and colloquial, but pared down and vivid enough to make it poetry.

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