Comments on: Old Lungs | Branches haiku poem example | 021609 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-483 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 00:37:44 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-483 Many thanks, Deb!

]]> By: Deb http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-477 Wed, 18 Feb 2009 03:03:49 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-477 I think it works incredibly well. Immediate, visceral.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-476 Wed, 18 Feb 2009 02:23:47 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-476 Gautami and Borut – Yes, old and worn lungs. Do you think the poem works?

Gabby – Thanks for the visit and generous comment. There are some haiku sites listed on our Haiku on the Web page that you may wish to browse.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-474 Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:21:03 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-474 Never thought of lungs that way!

]]> By: Gabby http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-473 Tue, 17 Feb 2009 17:17:37 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-473 This is brilliant. I like the idea of haikuhabits. I have been reading up on them over at http://www.haiku.com/Haiku and i hope i can create and publish haiku poems as well.

]]> By: borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/16/old-lungs-branches-haiku-poem-example-021609/#comment-470 Tue, 17 Feb 2009 08:27:30 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1481#comment-470 Sounds like a human being!?:)

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