These old lungs - Plastic flapping on wooded branches.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
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Sounds like a human being!?:)
This is brilliant. I like the idea of haikuhabits. I have been reading up on them over at http://www.haiku.com/Haiku and i hope i can create and publish haiku poems as well.
Never thought of lungs that way!
Gautami and Borut – Yes, old and worn lungs. Do you think the poem works?
Gabby – Thanks for the visit and generous comment. There are some haiku sites listed on our Haiku on the Web page that you may wish to browse.
I think it works incredibly well. Immediate, visceral.
Many thanks, Deb!
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February 17, 2009 at 3:27 am
Sounds like a human being!?:)
February 17, 2009 at 12:17 pm
This is brilliant. I like the idea of haikuhabits. I have been reading up on them over at http://www.haiku.com/Haiku and i hope i can create and publish haiku poems as well.
February 17, 2009 at 12:21 pm
Never thought of lungs that way!
February 17, 2009 at 9:23 pm
Gautami and Borut – Yes, old and worn lungs. Do you think the poem works?
Gabby – Thanks for the visit and generous comment. There are some haiku sites listed on our Haiku on the Web page that you may wish to browse.
February 17, 2009 at 10:03 pm
I think it works incredibly well. Immediate, visceral.
February 18, 2009 at 7:37 pm
Many thanks, Deb!