Comments on: Le Mot Juste | Writing senryu poem example | 021509 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Wed, 09 May 2012 20:49:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-475 Wed, 18 Feb 2009 02:15:12 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-475 Ah, to learn anew, to be in the right place or time . . . sometimes!

]]> By: borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-471 Tue, 17 Feb 2009 08:29:51 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-471 Right thing, right place, right time!?:)

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-463 Mon, 16 Feb 2009 16:06:59 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-463 I learnt something new.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-462 Mon, 16 Feb 2009 13:23:57 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-462 Was –
Le mot juste -
A dry field receives
raindrops.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-459 Mon, 16 Feb 2009 02:35:40 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-459 Thanks for the suggestion, Kris. What do you think about:

Le mot juste -
Raindrops on a dry
field.

]]> By: Kris http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/15/le-mot-juste-writing-senryu-poem-example-021509/#comment-458 Mon, 16 Feb 2009 02:11:17 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1470#comment-458 I love the bilingual wit and the meaning of this one – but I think it might be overly constrained by its form.
Would “raindrops / on a dry field” work? Or is there a more strikingly poetic way of expressing it for you?

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