February 10, 2009 · 8:55 pm
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Geese Descend | Birds haiku poem example | 021009

Geese
descend again, then
again.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

Inspired by the comment stream on Geese Rest

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Filed under Haiku Poems About Birds

2 Responses to Geese Descend | Birds haiku poem example | 021009

  1. Bill
    February 12, 2009 at 8:56 pm

    Very effective repetition here, and true to the moment.

    Reply
  2. Ken Wagner
    February 13, 2009 at 10:30 pm

    Thanks, Bill. I was trying to capture the sense of mass in motion as the whole herd of geese touch ground and take up (temporary) residence.

    Reply

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