Comments on: Hawk Circles | Birds haiku poem example | 020909 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Pat http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-486 Thu, 19 Feb 2009 23:55:00 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-486 I have featured this haiku on my website:
Haiku

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-435 Fri, 13 Feb 2009 01:33:05 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-435 comrade harps – Thanks!

]]> By: comrade harps http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-430 Thu, 12 Feb 2009 01:37:57 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-430 motion and motionless (expressed as motion) – lovely.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-429 Wed, 11 Feb 2009 02:16:17 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-429 This one seemed to flow well for both sound and meaning.

Responding to Bill’s suggestion about the two-part structure of haiku, I’m finding that the two parts may come from the “double meaning” that Dave points out.

Is double-meaning a way – to haiku?

]]> By: haikuexpeditions http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-426 Tue, 10 Feb 2009 14:56:42 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-426 very well done! love it. 1 image multiple emotions.

]]> By: Dave Bonta http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-425 Tue, 10 Feb 2009 03:26:46 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-425 Yeah, what Bill said. A nice double meaning there.

]]> By: Bill http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/09/hawk-circles-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-423 Tue, 10 Feb 2009 02:55:32 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1431#comment-423 “searching for motion” is an interesting way of seeing/saying it.

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