A hawk circles,
silently searching
for motion.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Hawk Circles | Birds haiku poem example | 020909
February 9, 2009 · 7 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
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A hawk circles,
silently searching
for motion.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
7 responses so far ↓
Bill // February 9, 2009 at 9:55 pm |
“searching for motion” is an interesting way of seeing/saying it.
Dave Bonta // February 9, 2009 at 10:26 pm |
Yeah, what Bill said. A nice double meaning there.
haikuexpeditions // February 10, 2009 at 9:56 am |
very well done! love it. 1 image multiple emotions.
Ken Wagner // February 10, 2009 at 9:16 pm |
This one seemed to flow well for both sound and meaning.
Responding to Bill’s suggestion about the two-part structure of haiku, I’m finding that the two parts may come from the “double meaning” that Dave points out.
Is double-meaning a way – to haiku?
comrade harps // February 11, 2009 at 8:37 pm |
motion and motionless (expressed as motion) – lovely.
Ken Wagner // February 12, 2009 at 8:33 pm |
comrade harps – Thanks!
Pat // February 19, 2009 at 6:55 pm |
I have featured this haiku on my website:
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