A hawk circles,
silently searching
for motion.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Hawk Circles | Birds haiku poem example | 020909
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A hawk circles,
silently searching
for motion.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Filed under Haiku Poems About Birds
“searching for motion” is an interesting way of seeing/saying it.
Yeah, what Bill said. A nice double meaning there.
very well done! love it. 1 image multiple emotions.
This one seemed to flow well for both sound and meaning.
Responding to Bill’s suggestion about the two-part structure of haiku, I’m finding that the two parts may come from the “double meaning” that Dave points out.
Is double-meaning a way – to haiku?
motion and motionless (expressed as motion) – lovely.
comrade harps – Thanks!
I have featured this haiku on my website:
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