Comments on: Geese Rest | Birds haiku poem example | 020809

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Wed, 11 Feb 2009 02:08:49 +0000

Check out today’s post, which was inspired by this comment stream. Thanks to all!

I know, Bill, I need to work on my haiku two-part structure, but this is fun, too. I’ll get there, I promise.

Bill — Tue, 10 Feb 2009 02:58:12 +0000

crowded park
the geese who came
to stay

Ken Wagner — Tue, 10 Feb 2009 01:35:42 +0000

Quite the portrait of geese we are building. I love it!

Geese descend
to this spot
again, again.

Bluegrass Poet — Mon, 09 Feb 2009 16:44:24 +0000

Here too the geese rest in the fields. Spring may come.

Brett — Mon, 09 Feb 2009 03:16:22 +0000

They Flew
away into the wind
yesterday