Comments on: Sparrows Splash | Birds haiku poem example | 020609 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-498 Wed, 25 Feb 2009 02:21:34 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-498 Good question, Usagi!

Haiku in English does not have to follow the 5-7-5 pattern.

There is an extensive discussion on the issue here – Forms in English Haiku discussed on OpenMicro

]]> By: Usagi http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-496 Tue, 24 Feb 2009 17:43:30 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-496 what about the 5-7-5 syllable stanza?

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-417 Sun, 08 Feb 2009 22:48:07 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-417 Ashi – Yes, I think the dogs and birds would enjoy each other’s haiku!

Devika – The scenes are – everywhere. We need only watch and wait, no?

]]> By: devika http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-414 Sun, 08 Feb 2009 14:57:32 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-414 Liked this, Ken

Almost like a scene seen somewhere…

wishes,
devika

]]> By: Ashi http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-413 Sun, 08 Feb 2009 13:22:42 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-413 Like this and even more when one connect your senryu dog poem, they could and do match each other.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/06/sparrows-splash-birds-haiku-poem-example/#comment-407 Sat, 07 Feb 2009 17:08:37 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1365#comment-407 like the alliteration

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