Sparrows splash
in shallow sunny
puddles.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Sparrows Splash | Birds haiku poem example | 020609
Filed under Haiku Poems About Birds
Sparrows splash
in shallow sunny
puddles.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Filed under Haiku Poems About Birds
like the alliteration
Like this and even more when one connect your senryu dog poem, they could and do match each other.
Liked this, Ken
Almost like a scene seen somewhere…
wishes,
devika
Ashi – Yes, I think the dogs and birds would enjoy each other’s haiku!
Devika – The scenes are – everywhere. We need only watch and wait, no?
what about the 5-7-5 syllable stanza?
Good question, Usagi!
Haiku in English does not have to follow the 5-7-5 pattern.
There is an extensive discussion on the issue here – Forms in English Haiku discussed on OpenMicro