Sparrows splash
in shallow sunny
puddles.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Sparrows Splash | Birds haiku poem example | 020609
February 6, 2009 · 6 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
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Sparrows splash
in shallow sunny
puddles.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
6 responses so far ↓
gautami tripathy // February 7, 2009 at 12:08 pm |
like the alliteration
Ashi // February 8, 2009 at 8:22 am |
Like this and even more when one connect your senryu dog poem, they could and do match each other.
devika // February 8, 2009 at 9:57 am |
Liked this, Ken
Almost like a scene seen somewhere…
wishes,
devika
Ken Wagner // February 8, 2009 at 5:48 pm |
Ashi – Yes, I think the dogs and birds would enjoy each other’s haiku!
Devika – The scenes are – everywhere. We need only watch and wait, no?
Usagi // February 24, 2009 at 12:43 pm |
what about the 5-7-5 syllable stanza?
Ken Wagner // February 24, 2009 at 9:21 pm |
Good question, Usagi!
Haiku in English does not have to follow the 5-7-5 pattern.
There is an extensive discussion on the issue here – Forms in English Haiku discussed on OpenMicro