Comments on: A Passing | Nature haiku poems examples | 020509 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/ How to Write Haiku Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Thu, 26 Aug 2010 14:05:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: noreen http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-710 noreen Mon, 19 Oct 2009 11:27:20 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-710 Its not a haiku poem, is it? its about nature and need three lines in 2 stanzas Its not a haiku poem, is it? its about nature and need three lines in 2 stanzas

]]> By: krisha ebora http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-662 krisha ebora Tue, 28 Jul 2009 08:32:28 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-662 gift of nature a blooming flowers. it is a gift of nature. it is beautiful. gift of nature

a blooming flowers.
it is a gift of nature.
it is beautiful.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-422 Ken Wagner Tue, 10 Feb 2009 01:39:35 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-422 <strong>comradeharps</strong> - Yes, "even buses are good." comradeharps – Yes, “even buses are good.”

]]> By: comradeharps http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-419 comradeharps Mon, 09 Feb 2009 12:06:50 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-419 I like the contrast of the combo. Nature and human. Because even buses are good. Nice. I like the contrast of the combo. Nature and human. Because even buses are good. Nice.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-415 Ken Wagner Sun, 08 Feb 2009 22:38:31 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-415 <strong>Devika and Borut</strong> - A dance, indeed! <strong>Crafty Green Poet</strong> - Yes, small differences do matter. In haiku, as in nature. Thanks for pointing that out. Devika and Borut – A dance, indeed!

Crafty Green Poet – Yes, small differences do matter. In haiku, as in nature. Thanks for pointing that out.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-408 Crafty Green Poet Sat, 07 Feb 2009 17:30:16 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-408 I like both, I like the different scene set up by each of them, I like the fact that this post encourages the reader to think about how small differences in the words in a haiku can make so much difference to the perception of the scene. I like both, I like the different scene set up by each of them, I like the fact that this post encourages the reader to think about how small differences in the words in a haiku can make so much difference to the perception of the scene.

]]> By: borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-406 borut Sat, 07 Feb 2009 08:05:01 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-406 Why not, yes, why not Walk along death's icy brink: Live fully – have fun. Which is just an attempt to paraphrase the much quoted (here) line of Colonel Sir Richard Burton, the 19th century British explorer, soldier, diplomat, translator, writer, poet and, last but not least, dervish of the Kaderi Order: ‘We dance along death's icy brink, but is the dance less full of fun.' The paradox: how can one, time-centred as we are, answer the call of timeless life!?:) Why not, yes, why not
Walk along death’s icy brink:
Live fully – have fun.

Which is just an attempt to paraphrase the much quoted (here) line of Colonel Sir Richard Burton, the 19th century British explorer, soldier, diplomat, translator, writer, poet and, last but not least, dervish of the Kaderi Order:

‘We dance along death’s icy brink, but is the dance less full of fun.’

The paradox: how can one, time-centred as we are, answer the call of timeless life!?:)

]]> By: devika http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-404 devika Sat, 07 Feb 2009 03:01:00 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-404 it should all be fun, if haikuing and blogging is all about fun :) thank you, Ken wishes, devika it should all be fun, if haikuing and blogging is all about fun :)

thank you, Ken

wishes,
devika

]]> By: devika http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-403 devika Sat, 07 Feb 2009 02:37:25 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-403 Hi Ken, There I agree -- And after all this blogging is also fun, no!? To me commenting is fun, but I am serious with my blogs :) Visit sometime when you are free-- the second last is a haiku -- http://devika-jyothi.blogspot.com/ wishes, devika Hi Ken,

There I agree —
And after all this blogging is also fun, no!?

To me commenting is fun, but I am serious with my blogs :)

Visit sometime when you are free– the second last is a haiku —

http://devika-jyothi.blogspot.com/

wishes,
devika

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/02/05/a-passing-nature-haiku-poems-examples/#comment-400 Ken Wagner Sat, 07 Feb 2009 02:31:22 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1360#comment-400 A haiku poem answered by a passing - poet! In combination, I thought they were a bit of a haiku spoof. The mundane nothingness of the cloud transforms into the unexpected force of a bus. After all, this should be fun, no? A haiku poem
answered by a passing –
poet!

In combination, I thought they were a bit of a haiku spoof.

The mundane nothingness of the cloud transforms into the unexpected force of a bus.

After all, this should be fun, no?

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