Comments on: Rain Melts | Rain haiku poem example | 013009 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Wed, 09 May 2012 20:49:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: jack cutler http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-826 Tue, 14 Jun 2011 22:36:19 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-826 This isn’t really a haiku, as a haiku has 3 lines – the 1st and the 3rd lines must have 5 syllables, and the 2nd line must have 7.

]]> By: Tara http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-745 Tue, 02 Mar 2010 19:40:20 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-745 Nice reflection and feeling of movement :-)

]]> By: Maryam E. Rezagah http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-736 Thu, 11 Feb 2010 16:38:29 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-736 Nice haiku, Ken

]]> By: Latha http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-614 Wed, 06 May 2009 12:19:17 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-614 Slipped into a nice haiku

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-338 Sun, 01 Feb 2009 01:53:09 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-338 haikuexpeditions – Yes, the sadness.

Gautami – To be saved – by a log? I’ll take the log.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-337 Sun, 01 Feb 2009 01:44:10 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-337 slipped yet again
into that precipice-
saved by a log

]]> By: haikuexpeditions http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/30/rain-melts-rain-haiku-poem-example/#comment-334 Sat, 31 Jan 2009 20:09:33 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1189#comment-334 slipped so far…hmmm
i perceive a sense of sadness as well although you may not have. ;)

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