Rain melts
the snow to evening ice -
We’ve slipped so far.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
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Rain melts
the snow to evening ice -
We’ve slipped so far.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Filed under Haiku Poems About Rain
slipped so far…hmmm
i perceive a sense of sadness as well although you may not have.
slipped yet again
into that precipice-
saved by a log
haikuexpeditions – Yes, the sadness.
Gautami – To be saved – by a log? I’ll take the log.
Slipped into a nice haiku
Nice haiku, Ken
Nice reflection and feeling of movement
This isn’t really a haiku, as a haiku has 3 lines – the 1st and the 3rd lines must have 5 syllables, and the 2nd line must have 7.