Rain melts
the snow to evening ice -
We’ve slipped so far.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Rain Melts | Rain haiku poem example | 013009
January 30, 2009 · 6 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Rain
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Rain melts
the snow to evening ice -
We’ve slipped so far.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About Rain
6 responses so far ↓
haikuexpeditions // January 31, 2009 at 3:09 pm |
slipped so far…hmmm
i perceive a sense of sadness as well although you may not have.
gautami tripathy // January 31, 2009 at 8:44 pm |
slipped yet again
into that precipice-
saved by a log
Ken Wagner // January 31, 2009 at 8:53 pm |
haikuexpeditions – Yes, the sadness.
Gautami – To be saved – by a log? I’ll take the log.
Latha // May 6, 2009 at 7:19 am |
Slipped into a nice haiku
Maryam E. Rezagah // February 11, 2010 at 11:38 am |
Nice haiku, Ken
Tara // March 2, 2010 at 2:40 pm |
Nice reflection and feeling of movement