Comments on: We Chatted | People senryu poem example | 012909 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/29/we-chatted-people-senryu-poem-example/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/29/we-chatted-people-senryu-poem-example/#comment-332 Sat, 31 Jan 2009 03:43:34 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1172#comment-332 Thanks, Dave and Gautami. This is one in a series of “people posts,” where I was struck by an outdoor image and then quickly associated it to a relationship dynamic, typically a lost connection.

These are rather autobiographical, I’m afraid, in that I am often better at focusing my attention on brief and vivid moments in the realm of strangers, animals, information, and inanimate nature, while losing connection with the two-legged folk who matter to me most.

Alas, to grow – through haiku.

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]]> By: Dave Bonta http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/29/we-chatted-people-senryu-poem-example/#comment-329 Fri, 30 Jan 2009 19:19:59 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1172#comment-329 I love this – the connections between chat, lunch, slush, sun.

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