We Chatted | People senryu poem example | 012909

3 Responses to We Chatted | People senryu poem example | 012909

1. Dave Bonta

   January 30, 2009 at 2:19 pm

   I love this – the connections between chat, lunch, slush, sun.

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2. gautami tripathy

   January 30, 2009 at 8:06 pm

   slush on sunny street is a great imagery..

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3. Ken Wagner

   January 30, 2009 at 10:43 pm

   Thanks, Dave and Gautami. This is one in a series of “people posts,” where I was struck by an outdoor image and then quickly associated it to a relationship dynamic, typically a lost connection.

   These are rather autobiographical, I’m afraid, in that I am often better at focusing my attention on brief and vivid moments in the realm of strangers, animals, information, and inanimate nature, while losing connection with the two-legged folk who matter to me most.

   Alas, to grow – through haiku.

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