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January 30, 2009 at 2:19 pm
I love this – the connections between chat, lunch, slush, sun.
January 30, 2009 at 8:06 pm
slush on sunny street is a great imagery..
January 30, 2009 at 10:43 pm
Thanks, Dave and Gautami. This is one in a series of “people posts,” where I was struck by an outdoor image and then quickly associated it to a relationship dynamic, typically a lost connection.
These are rather autobiographical, I’m afraid, in that I am often better at focusing my attention on brief and vivid moments in the realm of strangers, animals, information, and inanimate nature, while losing connection with the two-legged folk who matter to me most.
Alas, to grow – through haiku.