Comments on: Fewer Birds | Birds haiku poems examples | 012609 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-383 Wed, 04 Feb 2009 00:22:57 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-383 Thanks, Grant.

Presence/absence, scarcity/abundance, simplicity/complexity – these are the contrasts in which our voices take form and drift.

I really enjoy reading your work as well.

]]> By: Grant http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-350 Tue, 03 Feb 2009 12:29:58 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-350 Experiencing our existence beside absence we may feel it most deeply…really love these two haiku

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-345 Tue, 03 Feb 2009 01:30:53 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-345 I think it is a good idea. Dave Bonta introduced me to this link, which seems like something similar – http://thepoetrycollaborative.org. Dave recently started a “micropoem” collaborative called http://openmicro.org.

]]> By: haikuexpeditions http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-339 Mon, 02 Feb 2009 03:13:18 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-339 Talking of protecting our friends….Ken, I came upon this idea that I like to kick around and see if we are get a community of poets going….I was thinking of Poets Without Borders as a place for everyone from anywhere, everywhere to post poetry to build bonds across the world. No rules on type of poetry/language or any such thing…
PoetsWithoutBorders.wordpress.com
What do you//Gauthami/others think?
S

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-328 Fri, 30 Jan 2009 01:15:54 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-328 gautami – We must protect our friends – with poetry, no?

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-326 Thu, 29 Jan 2009 12:06:00 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-326 winged friends
hiding-
pollution rolling in?

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-319 Wed, 28 Jan 2009 02:39:45 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-319 Ah, Devika, spring is not now . . . and the future is always far. May our breath remain plenty like the hidden birds!

sanjay rajan, Dr Zen, haikuexpeditions – Nice collection of haiku. The birds are close, indeed, but just hidden. Like haiku. A haiku is a gift. Many thanks.

]]> By: haikuexpeditions http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-317 Wed, 28 Jan 2009 01:16:51 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-317 from this afternoon:

Gingerly moves
On frozen creek
Ducks tap dance

Blank stares
At cawing raven
…Notes exchanged

Enjoy,
http://thehaikumoment.wordpress.com

]]> By: Dr Zen http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-315 Tue, 27 Jan 2009 11:59:10 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-315 Hidden,
Comfort of twigs,
sparrows nest..

]]> By: sanjay rajan http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/26/fewer-birds-haiku-poems-examples-012609/#comment-314 Tue, 27 Jan 2009 06:33:51 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1090#comment-314 ravens gone
now just,
my breath

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