Fewer Birds | Birds haiku poems examples | 012609
January 26, 2009 · 11 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
Categories: Haiku Poems About Birds
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11 responses so far ↓
Devika // January 26, 2009 at 11:41 pm |
You see your breath, Ken?
I ‘take’ it.:-)
few birds — its still winter, no?
they will be everywhere by spring..not far
wishes,
devika
sanjay rajan // January 27, 2009 at 1:33 am |
ravens gone
now just,
my breath
Dr Zen // January 27, 2009 at 6:59 am |
Hidden,
Comfort of twigs,
sparrows nest..
haikuexpeditions // January 27, 2009 at 8:16 pm |
from this afternoon:
Gingerly moves
On frozen creek
Ducks tap dance
Blank stares
At cawing raven
…Notes exchanged
Enjoy,
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Ken Wagner // January 27, 2009 at 9:39 pm |
Ah, Devika, spring is not now . . . and the future is always far. May our breath remain plenty like the hidden birds!
sanjay rajan, Dr Zen, haikuexpeditions – Nice collection of haiku. The birds are close, indeed, but just hidden. Like haiku. A haiku is a gift. Many thanks.
gautami tripathy // January 29, 2009 at 7:06 am |
winged friends
hiding-
pollution rolling in?
Ken Wagner // January 29, 2009 at 8:15 pm |
gautami – We must protect our friends – with poetry, no?
haikuexpeditions // February 1, 2009 at 10:13 pm |
Talking of protecting our friends….Ken, I came upon this idea that I like to kick around and see if we are get a community of poets going….I was thinking of Poets Without Borders as a place for everyone from anywhere, everywhere to post poetry to build bonds across the world. No rules on type of poetry/language or any such thing…
PoetsWithoutBorders.wordpress.com
What do you//Gauthami/others think?
S
Ken Wagner // February 2, 2009 at 8:30 pm |
I think it is a good idea. Dave Bonta introduced me to this link, which seems like something similar – http://thepoetrycollaborative.org. Dave recently started a “micropoem” collaborative called http://openmicro.org.
Grant // February 3, 2009 at 7:29 am |
Experiencing our existence beside absence we may feel it most deeply…really love these two haiku
Ken Wagner // February 3, 2009 at 7:22 pm |
Thanks, Grant.
Presence/absence, scarcity/abundance, simplicity/complexity – these are the contrasts in which our voices take form and drift.
I really enjoy reading your work as well.