swimming dust
in the light that cracks
the window
Craig Peritz on Haiku Habits
This is a special guest post by my friend Craig Peritz. I haven’t seen him in 20 years, but we recently reconnected on Facebook.
Swimming Dust | Sunlight haiku poem example | 012409
January 24, 2009 · 7 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun
7 responses so far ↓
Borut // January 25, 2009 at 5:04 am |
Dust particles meet:
Coming across a Peric(tz) –
My mom’s maiden name.
Devika // January 25, 2009 at 9:23 am |
Striking imagery, Ken
wishes,
devika
Ken Wagner // January 25, 2009 at 7:53 pm |
Yes, very striking. Proud to publish it; wish I had written it!
gautami tripathy // January 26, 2009 at 10:23 am |
dusty haze-
friends from past
bring light
Devika // January 26, 2009 at 11:00 am |
Hi Ken,
A response to Gautami’s comment. Can’t help but comment.
A new moon night
searching archives to see
Old faces of some friends
Its best left like that. But often faces of friends from the past are so hazy…fast changing features…. wished to see their old faces again…
devika
Ken Wagner // January 26, 2009 at 7:33 pm |
A great exchange of thoughts and poems about friendship. Thank you.
Devika // January 26, 2009 at 11:43 pm |
thank you Ken
devika