Comments on: Frozen Field | Nature haiku poem example | 012209 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Wed, 09 May 2012 20:49:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: brittanyy! http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-822 Thu, 12 May 2011 01:02:40 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-822 agree with Jacob!!

]]> By: Jacob http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-602 Thu, 30 Apr 2009 18:35:00 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-602 most of these aren’t haiku
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

firey red sunset
green flash on the horizon
crystal blue ocean

]]> By: nhicole http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-386 Wed, 04 Feb 2009 12:47:14 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-386 those haiku that i read was good enough

]]> By: Borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-297 Sun, 25 Jan 2009 10:06:31 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-297 Still it!?:)

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-296 Sun, 25 Jan 2009 02:20:37 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-296 Nice one, Dr. Zen.

Borut – What to do? Life is not still!

]]> By: Borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-295 Sat, 24 Jan 2009 21:40:57 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-295 Still life.

]]> By: Dr Zen http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-294 Sat, 24 Jan 2009 12:47:07 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-294 Running on the frosty highway
the tired truck
yearns for warm sleep..

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-293 Sat, 24 Jan 2009 02:08:02 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-293 You are taking this scene in another direction, Gautami! Add motion, and this seems a nice place to be. To dance, even.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-292 Fri, 23 Jan 2009 16:36:46 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-292 tractor leaves tracks
wheat boughs sway
are they dancing?

]]> By: harps http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-291 Fri, 23 Jan 2009 06:38:11 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-291 Nice still life. I can see it.

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