Comments on: Frozen Field | Nature haiku poem example | 012209 http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/ How to Write Haiku Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Thu, 26 Aug 2010 14:05:13 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Jacob http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-602 Jacob Thu, 30 Apr 2009 18:35:00 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-602 most of these aren't haiku 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables firey red sunset green flash on the horizon crystal blue ocean most of these aren’t haiku
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

firey red sunset
green flash on the horizon
crystal blue ocean

]]> By: nhicole http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-386 nhicole Wed, 04 Feb 2009 12:47:14 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-386 those haiku that i read was good enough those haiku that i read was good enough

]]> By: Borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-297 Borut Sun, 25 Jan 2009 10:06:31 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-297 Still it!?:) Still it!?:)

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-296 Ken Wagner Sun, 25 Jan 2009 02:20:37 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-296 Nice one, Dr. Zen. Borut - What to do? Life is not still! Nice one, Dr. Zen.

Borut – What to do? Life is not still!

]]> By: Borut http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-295 Borut Sat, 24 Jan 2009 21:40:57 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-295 Still life. Still life.

]]> By: Dr Zen http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-294 Dr Zen Sat, 24 Jan 2009 12:47:07 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-294 Running on the frosty highway the tired truck yearns for warm sleep.. Running on the frosty highway
the tired truck
yearns for warm sleep..

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-293 Ken Wagner Sat, 24 Jan 2009 02:08:02 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-293 You are taking this scene in another direction, Gautami! Add motion, and this seems a nice place to be. To dance, even. You are taking this scene in another direction, Gautami! Add motion, and this seems a nice place to be. To dance, even.

]]> By: gautami tripathy http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-292 gautami tripathy Fri, 23 Jan 2009 16:36:46 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-292 tractor leaves tracks wheat boughs sway are they dancing? tractor leaves tracks
wheat boughs sway
are they dancing?

]]> By: harps http://haikuhabits.com/2009/01/22/frozen-field-nature-haiku-poem-example-012209/#comment-291 harps Fri, 23 Jan 2009 06:38:11 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=1065#comment-291 Nice still life. I can see it. Nice still life. I can see it.

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