The tractor sits still -
A frozen field
of wheat.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Frozen Field | Nature haiku poem example | 012209
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The tractor sits still -
A frozen field
of wheat.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Filed under Haiku Poems About Nature
Nice still life. I can see it.
tractor leaves tracks
wheat boughs sway
are they dancing?
You are taking this scene in another direction, Gautami! Add motion, and this seems a nice place to be. To dance, even.
Running on the frosty highway
the tired truck
yearns for warm sleep..
Still life.
Nice one, Dr. Zen.
Borut – What to do? Life is not still!
Still it!?:)
those haiku that i read was good enough
most of these aren’t haiku
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
firey red sunset
green flash on the horizon
crystal blue ocean
agree with Jacob!!