Peanuts Sprout | Inauguration haiku poem example | 012009

“Peanuts won’t sprout
in that patch of dirt.”
The old man smiles.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

For Barack Obama. Today was my birthday, and I got a new president.

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Filed under Senryu Poems About Human Nature

7 Responses to Peanuts Sprout | Inauguration haiku poem example | 012009

  1. Happy birthday! A fun poem.

  2. the peanut man,
    the oil man and his dad,
    the man from hope,
    and all present, smile
    and say, “Best wishes.”

  3. Ken Wagner

    Thanks, Dave and Adriaan. It was a good day all around. It would be interesting to know what those luminaries were really thinking.

    I wrote this one a bit ago after learning about the troubles that multi-national corporations had growing peanuts in Africa. The local knowledge on soil conditions had been lost or ignored.

    Somehow, it felt right for the Obama’s inauguration. Poetic license, perhaps.

  4. Jack Loftis

    peanuts won’t sprout
    In that patch of dirt
    The young Obama smiles

    That’s what I liked about this poem. Eerily
    apropos for this moment which dispatches
    so many “can’t happen’s” at a single event.

    So simple, so much.

    Looking for more time to peruse your site.

    MacJax

  5. Ken Wagner

    Thanks, Jack. I think your version works a bit better for the event, no?

  6. peanut will sprout
    anywhere
    it only needs a will

  7. Ken Wagner

    Indeed, “it only needs a will”. Good soil helps, however. And a bit of luck. We are improbable, after all – http://haikuhabits.com/snowflakes-fall-snow-haiku-poem-example-010209/.

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