Footprints | Snow haiku poem example | 011109

5 Responses to Footprints | Snow haiku poem example | 011109

1. Adriaan

   January 12, 2009 at 8:10 am

   Who decides where footprints don’t belong?

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2. gautami tripathy

   January 12, 2009 at 11:01 am

   I agree with Adriaan.

   in a drab day
   footprints
   mark my existence

   And I have linked you on my blog. Do check it out!

   unconnected

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3. Ken Wagner

   January 12, 2009 at 11:52 am

   There I go, trapped in my brain again! I wanted this to be spooky, with a sense of suspense – even danger. This is more closely what I meant to convey -

   Fresh snow -
   A stranger’s footprints in
   my back yard

   Thanks for the feedback. What do you think of this version, or perhaps it is a separate poem?

   Gautami – Thanks for the link!

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4. gautami tripathy

   January 12, 2009 at 12:00 pm

   Ken, I like it better. It creates that feeling of danger.

   And I am GAUTAMI not Guatami.

   *grin*

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5. Ken Wagner

   January 12, 2009 at 7:25 pm

   Thanks, Adriaan and Gautami (I fixed the spelling – sorry!). I hope you like the series.

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