January 10, 2009 · 8:11 pm
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Wind Hits | Wind senryu poem example | 011009

A wave of wind
hits . . . I wait behind
my desk

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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Filed under Senryu Poems About Human Nature

2 Responses to Wind Hits | Wind senryu poem example | 011009

  1. gautami tripathy
    January 10, 2009 at 9:46 pm

    cooped up
    wrapped in a shawl
    i observe the wall

    Reply
  2. Ken Wagner
    January 11, 2009 at 8:38 pm

    I like your poem. The closeness is constraining, yet somehow comforting.

    Reply

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