Cold Sun | Sun haiku poem example | 010709

7 Responses to Cold Sun | Sun haiku poem example | 010709

1. gautami tripathy

   January 8, 2009 at 10:07 am

   I am enjoying this!

   sinus pain-
   resultant of
   cooling sun

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2. Ken Wagner

   January 8, 2009 at 8:28 pm

   You enjoy – sinus pain?!

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3. Borut

   January 9, 2009 at 3:55 am

   A break-through haiku!?:)

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4. gautami tripathy

   January 9, 2009 at 4:44 am

   No!

   I am enjoying haikuing!

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5. Ken Wagner

   January 9, 2009 at 3:27 pm

   Ah, haikuing. It is good to enjoy. It is good to haiku. Good!

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6. Dave

   January 10, 2009 at 9:11 pm

   I agree with the others – this one’s pretty effective, Ken. Not sure I can tell you why…

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7. Ken Wagner

   January 11, 2009 at 8:33 pm

   The efficacy of the inexplicable!

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