The cold sun
breaks through -
Sinus pain.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Cold Sun | Sun haiku poem example | 010709
January 7, 2009 · 7 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun
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The cold sun
breaks through -
Sinus pain.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun
7 responses so far ↓
gautami tripathy // January 8, 2009 at 10:07 am |
I am enjoying this!
sinus pain-
resultant of
cooling sun
Ken Wagner // January 8, 2009 at 8:28 pm |
You enjoy – sinus pain?!
Borut // January 9, 2009 at 3:55 am |
A break-through haiku!?:)
gautami tripathy // January 9, 2009 at 4:44 am |
No!
I am enjoying haikuing!
Ken Wagner // January 9, 2009 at 3:27 pm |
Ah, haikuing. It is good to enjoy. It is good to haiku. Good!
Dave // January 10, 2009 at 9:11 pm |
I agree with the others – this one’s pretty effective, Ken. Not sure I can tell you why…
Ken Wagner // January 11, 2009 at 8:33 pm |
The efficacy of the inexplicable!