I am so
trapped in my small
wet brain.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
I am so
trapped in my small
wet brain.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Senryu Poems About Human Nature
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9 responses so far ↓
gautami tripathy // January 6, 2009 at 7:46 am |
trapped out
in the wet-
out of my brain
gautami tripathy // January 6, 2009 at 7:52 am |
Ken,
If you like you can check out Poetry Train being run each Monday. It has no prompt as such but poetry is encouraged, haiku included. Do check it out. This would give you wider audience. There are others too. You can explore from my blogroll.
Tikkis // January 6, 2009 at 4:09 pm |
Brain storm
whipping the waxing moon –
a wintry wind
Ken Wagner // January 6, 2009 at 9:40 pm |
gautami tripathy – Thanks for the invite! I will check it out. It would be good to break out of my brain, if only on a Monday!
Tikkis – Nice one! Reads equally well as haiku or a neurological complaint! Hard to achieve that mental feat.
Borut // January 7, 2009 at 2:25 am |
I am who I am:
However small you wet brain,
It is still a trap.
Ken Wagner // January 7, 2009 at 6:54 pm |
Is the brain a trap – or an unopened gift? I hope – the latter.
Borut // January 10, 2009 at 4:19 am |
As to the usefulness of our brain or reasoning power, the last part of a saying attributed to Mohammed could be of some help: Trust in God, but tie your camel first. (A reply to a wild Bedouin, who, hearing for the first time Mohammed preach about God, would only trust, leaving it to God to do all the work)…
Ken Wagner // January 10, 2009 at 8:21 pm |
Or – Trust your brain, but tie yourself to God first.
jessica // May 4, 2009 at 9:13 pm |
dark as the sky is
you can always fill
the air with sower