Comments on: Night Chill | Night haiku poem example | 010609

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 00:29:46 +0000

Yes! That was the image, Sage. Except for the barren snow-covered field – I’m not lucky enough to leave near one of those. Thanks for the response and comment!

By: Sage

Sage — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 16:51:38 +0000

I get an image of a cold evening and the warm light coming from a home across a barren snow-covered field.

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 01:17:37 +0000

What is your response to the poem, Kris? Why has it changed over time?

By: Kris

Kris — Sat, 10 Jan 2009 02:32:52 +0000

This one is growing on me.
Borut’s poem sounds Sufi, with its capital “F”

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 23:55:50 +0000

Nice ones, friends. I love the rhythms of fireflies taking flight in flickering light!

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 14:29:16 +0000

flickering light-
fireflies
taking flight

By: Borut

Borut — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 07:14:19 +0000

In this maze of life,
Run through moments of beauty,
chasing the true Friend.