A blue still
night chill – The house
lights flicker.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Night Chill | Night haiku poem example | 010609
January 6, 2009 · 7 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Night
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A blue still
night chill – The house
lights flicker.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About Night
7 responses so far ↓
Borut // January 7, 2009 at 2:14 am |
In this maze of life,
Run through moments of beauty,
chasing the true Friend.
gautami tripathy // January 7, 2009 at 9:29 am |
flickering light-
fireflies
taking flight
Ken Wagner // January 7, 2009 at 6:55 pm |
Nice ones, friends. I love the rhythms of fireflies taking flight in flickering light!
Kris // January 9, 2009 at 9:32 pm |
This one is growing on me.
Borut’s poem sounds Sufi, with its capital “F”
Ken Wagner // January 10, 2009 at 8:17 pm |
What is your response to the poem, Kris? Why has it changed over time?
Sage // January 12, 2009 at 11:51 am |
I get an image of a cold evening and the warm light coming from a home across a barren snow-covered field.
Ken Wagner // January 12, 2009 at 7:29 pm |
Yes! That was the image, Sage. Except for the barren snow-covered field – I’m not lucky enough to leave near one of those. Thanks for the response and comment!