Comments on: Chopped Wood | Nature haiku poem | 010509

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 23:52:59 +0000

The butterflies are not coarse, indeed. But what of the coarse things? I love them, too! Haiku is both coarse and not coarse.

Borut — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 07:20:46 +0000

What to do with them,
In this world of coarse matter –
Ah, the butterflies!?

Ken Wagner — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 02:06:22 +0000

I like your version. Who needs haiku rules when on a lovely haiku hike??

gautami tripathy — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 12:45:35 +0000

chopping wood
all day long
i missed the butterflies

*grin*

However syllables are gone, taking a hike!

Ken Wagner — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 00:50:29 +0000

Was -
I chopped wood
all day – Now the butterflies
are gone.