I chopped wood
all day. I missed seeing
the butterflies.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Chopped Wood | Nature haiku poem | 010509
January 5, 2009 · 5 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About Nature
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I chopped wood
all day. I missed seeing
the butterflies.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About Nature
5 responses so far ↓
Ken Wagner // January 5, 2009 at 7:50 pm |
Was -
I chopped wood
all day – Now the butterflies
are gone.
gautami tripathy // January 6, 2009 at 7:45 am |
chopping wood
all day long
i missed the butterflies
*grin*
However syllables are gone, taking a hike!
Ken Wagner // January 6, 2009 at 9:06 pm |
I like your version. Who needs haiku rules when on a lovely haiku hike??
Borut // January 7, 2009 at 2:20 am |
What to do with them,
In this world of coarse matter –
Ah, the butterflies!?
Ken Wagner // January 7, 2009 at 6:52 pm |
The butterflies are not coarse, indeed. But what of the coarse things? I love them, too! Haiku is both coarse and not coarse.