Chopped Wood | Nature haiku poem | 010509

5 Responses to Chopped Wood | Nature haiku poem | 010509

1. Ken Wagner

   January 5, 2009 at 7:50 pm

   Was -
   I chopped wood
   all day – Now the butterflies
   are gone.

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2. gautami tripathy

   January 6, 2009 at 7:45 am

   chopping wood
   all day long
   i missed the butterflies

   *grin*

   However syllables are gone, taking a hike!

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3. Ken Wagner

   January 6, 2009 at 9:06 pm

   I like your version. Who needs haiku rules when on a lovely haiku hike??

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4. Borut

   January 7, 2009 at 2:20 am

   What to do with them,
   In this world of coarse matter –
   Ah, the butterflies!?

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5. Ken Wagner

   January 7, 2009 at 6:52 pm

   The butterflies are not coarse, indeed. But what of the coarse things? I love them, too! Haiku is both coarse and not coarse.

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