His coat
is still winter thick – A bear
sniffing berries.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
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His coat
is still winter thick – A bear
sniffing berries.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Filed under Haiku Poems About Animals
Perfect haiku to read for this chilly morning! Thanks…
shouldn’t he be hibernating?
nice one
Yes, hibernating vs. berries!
I meant for this one to suggest the emergence of spring from winter. Perhaps adding “still” in the second line will make this clearer.
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His coat
is winter thick – A bear
sniffing berries.
Ah, the coat! I kind of envy the bear!:)
The bear needs more than our envy! He needs to sniff his berries – in peace.
Peace, Brother Bear!:)
Yes, peace. And battle, too. A peaceful battle is best, still.