Comments on: Snowflakes Fall | Snow haiku poem example | 010209

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Wed, 07 Jan 2009 02:01:31 +0000

Kris - Thanks, Kris. I enjoy improbabilities in general, especially unlikely precipitation. Florida's tropical weather must produce many delightful surprises.

By: Kris

Kris — Tue, 06 Jan 2009 01:54:27 +0000

I like this one – and I’ve seen snowflakes from a sunny sky – also rain. That happens a lot here in Florida.

Happy New Year!

Kris

By: harps

harps — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 13:07:51 +0000

“Perhaps the improbable can also be inevitable?” – agree

By: Borut

Borut — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 08:36:56 +0000

Thank you, Ken!:)

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 22:58:55 +0000

Borut - Please do. Honored. The threads run through.

By: Borut

Borut — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 22:41:48 +0000

Ken, would you mind if I post the below haiku on my blog!?:) The first two are more or less your work – with some rearrangements of mine added. The last one is the famous piece by Issa, set in the 5/7/5 format and paraphrased by me. The whole thing seems interesting enough!?:)

I can’t believe it:
How come snowflakes keep falling
From a sunny sky!?

It may well be true
That hawks don’t care for haiku –
Too spiritual!?

From the time we’re born,
Until we breathe our last:
Words full of nonsense.

By: Borut

Borut — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 21:46:33 +0000

I can’t believe it:
Snow flakes keep falling
From a sunny sky!?:))

Still, essentially, a superb vision of man’s eternal origin and his temporary plight!:)

By: Ken Wagner

Ken Wagner — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 18:36:49 +0000

Perhaps the improbable can also be inevitable?

By: gautami tripathy

gautami tripathy — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 03:00:36 +0000

Or maybe not…

In the bigger picture of things, one really does not know..

By: harps

harps — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 21:35:28 +0000

we are indeed