A cold wind
so hard my eyes hurt -
Orphaned.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Thank you for the video link, Borut.
Orphan’s Lament, by Huun Huur Tu, a band of throat singers from Tuva -
Also made me think of this post -
A cold wind
so hard my eyes hurt -
Orphaned.
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Thank you for the video link, Borut.
Orphan’s Lament, by Huun Huur Tu, a band of throat singers from Tuva -
Also made me think of this post -
Categories: Haiku and Senryu Poems with Music Video
8 responses so far ↓
Borut // January 1, 2009 at 6:26 pm |
Orphan’s lament! Kidding: just the title of a song by Huun Huur Tu, a band of throat singers from Tuva!:) Thanks for stopping on my blog and for your thought-provoking comments. Happy New Year!:)
Ken Wagner // January 1, 2009 at 11:03 pm |
I would love to hear throat singers from Tuva, some day.
This one was a bit of a risk. At the risk of sounding foolish or forced, “Orphaned” is actually the word that hit me when that wind slammed into my face. There is a reason, perhaps a buried reason. It has something to do with vulnerability.
Forsaken, forgotten, and abandoned were other options that occurred to me later, but I decided to stick with the first, for better or worse.
Thanks browsing my blog. I hope you find some that interest you.
Adriaan // January 2, 2009 at 5:22 am |
I wondered about “orphaned”, one does tend to take a word like that more literally.
Borut // January 2, 2009 at 6:57 am |
gautami tripathy // January 2, 2009 at 10:01 am |
‘orphaned’ is the perfect word here. You couldn’t have said it better.
Good to find your blog. Bookmarking you..
Got here from Borut’s.
gautami tripathy // January 2, 2009 at 10:31 am |
Oops!
Instead of leaving my poetry writing blog, I linked here my book reviewing blog. Sorry about the faux pas!
Here it is:
http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/
Geri // January 2, 2009 at 12:34 pm |
I’m not a poet, but I like the word orphaned. I think it’s perfect.
Ken Wagner // January 2, 2009 at 8:33 pm |
Borut – Thanks for the video link. I loved it and added it to the original post.
Adriaan – I meant it literally. I felt orphaned! Not sure why.
gautami tripathy – Thanks for your reaction. I look forward to browsing both your blogs!
Geri – No need to be a poet. It’s a human thing. Thanks.