Comments on: Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908 http://haikuhabits.com/2008/12/29/cant-see-sun-haiku-poem-example-291208/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Fri, 03 Feb 2012 21:09:43 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Adriaan http://haikuhabits.com/2008/12/29/cant-see-sun-haiku-poem-example-291208/#comment-176 Fri, 02 Jan 2009 10:19:30 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=826#comment-176 Mmmm, I don’t know.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2008/12/29/cant-see-sun-haiku-poem-example-291208/#comment-175 Fri, 02 Jan 2009 03:38:43 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=826#comment-175 What about -

I can’t see -
The sun’s glare
on frozen streets

]]> By: Adriaan http://haikuhabits.com/2008/12/29/cant-see-sun-haiku-poem-example-291208/#comment-174 Thu, 01 Jan 2009 17:50:48 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=826#comment-174 How do you know the sun glares if you can’t see?

But seriously, isn’t it seeing (nothing but the glaring sun) that’s the problem, instead of not seeing?

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