I can’t see
On frozen streets
the sun glares
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908
December 29, 2008 · 3 Comments
Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun
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I can’t see
On frozen streets
the sun glares
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Haiku Poems About The Sun
3 responses so far ↓
Adriaan // January 1, 2009 at 12:50 pm |
How do you know the sun glares if you can’t see?
But seriously, isn’t it seeing (nothing but the glaring sun) that’s the problem, instead of not seeing?
Ken Wagner // January 1, 2009 at 10:38 pm |
What about -
I can’t see -
The sun’s glare
on frozen streets
Adriaan // January 2, 2009 at 5:19 am |
Mmmm, I don’t know.