December 29, 2008 · 5:43 pm
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Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908

I can’t see
On frozen streets
the sun glares

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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Filed under Haiku Poems About The Sun

3 Responses to Can’t See | Sun haiku poem example | 122908

  1. Adriaan
    January 1, 2009 at 12:50 pm

    How do you know the sun glares if you can’t see?

    But seriously, isn’t it seeing (nothing but the glaring sun) that’s the problem, instead of not seeing?

    Reply
  2. Ken Wagner
    January 1, 2009 at 10:38 pm

    What about -

    I can’t see -
    The sun’s glare
    on frozen streets

    Reply

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