December 24, 2008 · 9:51 pm
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Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408

Cut trees
in a vacant lot
drying out.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

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Filed under Haiku Poems About Trees

4 Responses to Cut Trees | Trees haiku poem example | 122408

  1. Adriaan
    January 1, 2009 at 12:32 pm

    Like it. But does “vacant lots” need to be plural?

    Reply
  2. Ken Wagner
    January 1, 2009 at 10:23 pm

    Yes, I think you are correct.

    Was -
    Cut trees
    in vacant lots
    drying out.

    Reply
  4. Ken Wagner
    February 2, 2009 at 8:26 pm

    Yes, that is a nice follow-up poem. What happened to last year’s unused Christmas trees? Hopefully, they serve as winter shelter for small creatures.

    Reply

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