December 8, 2008 · 9:07 pm
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Revved Motors | Trees haiku poem example | 120808

Revved motors
echo and swell. Those trees
are now gone.

Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits

2 Comments

Filed under Haiku Poems About Trees

2 Responses to Revved Motors | Trees haiku poem example | 120808

  1. harps
    December 9, 2008 at 1:34 am

    like echo and swell, a nice contrast of expansion with the vacancy of the trees now gone

    Reply
  2. Ken Wagner
    December 9, 2008 at 8:57 pm

    harps – Thanks for the comment. Perhaps too vacant??

    Reply

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