Wake up
to go outside. Where’s your
dog leash?
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Wake up
to go outside. Where’s your
dog leash?
Ken Wagner on Haiku Habits
Categories: Senryu Poems About Dogs
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4 responses so far ↓
aj3d // November 25, 2008 at 4:52 pm |
This one works, and I think you’re right calling it a senryu.
Ken Wagner // November 25, 2008 at 10:20 pm |
aj3d – Thanks. I am still grappling with the difference between haiku and senryu. What does the difference mean to you?
aj3d // November 26, 2008 at 3:33 am |
Haiku present an image (two rather, and not necessarily visual) without explaining or interpreting anything. Without thinking, as they would say in Zen.
Senryu are any poem in the haiku-format that are not haiku. Most are funny poems about the human condition, or about animals doing silly things, but they can be about anything (sci-fi-ku, etc.).
That’s how I see it.
Ken Wagner // November 26, 2008 at 9:25 pm |
aj3d – That is a very helpful distinction. Clearer than I have found elsewhere. Thanks.